Since I, like everyone else with a computer and a wifi connection, use it so often to vent, I thought I would just say that this morning I had my drawing, I had to scan it, I was awake at 7:20 and I thought - argh if I go to Officeworks to scan it now, there'll be a massive queue or something, and when I come back I'll have lost my choice parking space right outside, but argh, I have to do it sooner rather than later or it'll haunt me, so, I went and hang the consequences. The consequences were: I got there, no-one was there waiting to use the scanners, I did the thing, I came back and got a parking space outside the flat, the traffic wasn't that bad, everything was straightforward. Worst issues: (1) the first scanner I tried wasn't working (or took too long to turn on; couldn't tell) (2) the sanitiser at Officeworks (called 'Mia') is kind of gummy and takes a long time to dry on your hands.
Then I did the greys and some tweaking on the page and it is done. IT IS DONE.
The earlier version of this page was ugly and needlessly complicated, with a huge 'Later' banner across the middle and (as Laura pointed out) cushion buttons that looked like flowers floating in space. These were confusing especially as there were flowers in amongst the 'Later' and Aspic was eating a flower. As below, though this is the version where I had already started trying to grey out the black on the top-left frame, which is why it all looks weird around Grace's head. When I redrew I noticed that I had semi-repeated the word 'prepare' (third frame) and it was more nuanced for Grace to say 'I told her it was... TV' which is a good way to code it for the two adults talking although in fact she gave a fairly bad explanation. But looking at the below version I am really glad I redid the whole thing considering the (clearly, very badly fixed up though I don't remember from what) 'Judy Pinder doesn't know any- (BIG SNOUT BREAK) thing', the aforementioned repetition of 'prepared/prepare', the fifth frame which is supposed to be Sherman folding his arms in exasperation I guess but he looks like he's gone to sleep in a straightjacket and also the opportunity for him to spell out in greater detail what he thinks of the documentary. So this is my abandoned attempt to fix the previous version of the page:If I was Robert Crumb or Carol Tyler or Lindsay Arnold or, indeed, any kind of competent cartoonist, I'dl have them doing other things while they were talking, cutting onions or smoking cigarettes or fucking or something but I'm not capable of making such busy frames and I suppose on some level I feel it gets in the way of the dialogue (in that regard perhaps I'm just wasting comics and I should be writing a bad play). I am well aware that people don't just stand around and talk to each other (although admittedly these two, with their history of fictional TV narratives, might be more inclined to do it than some others, and they are talking about something important). Anyway, I better stop thinking about this because I'm starting to become inclined to redraw the whole thing with Sherman cutting a diamond or something.
Naturally the EG was like Woodstock or something, although this picture doesn't really show how crowed it was. The most interesting thing that happened (apart from me being interesting) was this cheerleading flash mob:
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On Friday night I saw a group* of cheerleaders rehearsing in the laundry carpark around the corner. I wonder if it was your EG cheerleaders? Either that or there are more cheerleaders around than we know of.
*I have just discovered that apparently "an array" is the collective noun for cheerleaders.
These cheerleaders were, I'm pretty sure, men and women, though to be honest, they might have all been men. Or at any rate: people with beards.
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